

Obstacles to Good Writing # 4: Range
Apart from the level of vocabulary - whether a set of words is too simple, average or too advanced for a corresponding set of readers - there is another approach to vocabulary which is important for writers. This is the range of the words used, by which I mean the lexicon of a particular genre or type of book. Tolkien was particularly careful in his choice of words, being a philologist by profession. His most famous work, The Lord of the Rings, contains several sub-lexico


Obstacles to Good Writing # 3: Vocabulary
There’s another potential obstacle that arises between the writer and the reader which is occasionally so obvious that it is overlooked, and that is vocabulary. The word ‘vocabulary’ stems from a late Middle English word which traces back to the Latin vocabulum, from vocare ‘call’, perhaps indicating a teaching method whereby students had to call out words and their meanings in order to learn them. General vocabulary has declined over recent decades, most would agree, but


Obstacles to Good Writing # 2: Pace
Lots of telling, rather than showing, pushes the reader out of the story and slows things right down; showing, rather than telling, pulls the reader into the story - in fact, right into the characters’ heads - and speeds things up. That’s one way to control the pace of the story. Both ways are means to ends. At some points in Leo Tolstoy’s classic novel War and Peace, the author ‘tells’ to the degree that he departs entirely from relating a tale featuring characters having


Obstacles to Good Writing # 1: Telling, Not Showing
You have probably heard the maxim ‘Show, Don’t Tell’ when it comes to writing fiction. I’m reading a book at the moment (which shall remain nameless) that tends to violate that piece of advice. I’m about a third of the way in, and by far the largest part of the narrative so far has been describing events almost like a historical chronicle, with very little dialogue or character interaction. It gets away with it to some extent because the ideas are intriguing, and also because


The World of Marketing # 9: The Ad, The Group, The Magazine and The Book
There was once an ad, a social media group, an online magazine and a book. The ad’s main advantage was that it travelled far and wide, but its disadvantage was that, as it moved very quickly, and didn’t stay in one place for more than a second or two, not many people noticed it and it didn’t get much feedback. It also cost money. The social media group, on the other hand, tended to linger in places a little longer, getting to know a few of the locals, and encouraging them


Four Vital Factors In Any Marketing Campaign
What does a marketing campaign need in order to accomplish its goals? Well, the first thing it needs is goals. These have to be defined and realistic. Many writers, setting out to market their books, have only the vaguest notion of how they would define ‘success’ in marketing. Do they want overnight stardom? Or a slowly building fanbase? Or notoriety? Or prize-winning recognition? But sitting down and working out what goals one wants to achieve brings to the fore several fa


The Seven Levels of Attention - and What Writers Need to Know About Them
In the course of this series, we have looked at Attention as a kind of commodity, and examined ways in which it can be directed. We have also come to see that Attention and Meaning are directly related and hopefully realised that Meaning of one kind or another is the thing that we are all seeking. I broke down Meaning into four distinct types: sequential meaning, vertical meaning, contextual meaning and embracive meaning. These are just names, though. To understand what the


Cuentos del Cañon: A Review
When I first began reading Carmen Baca’s new book Cuentos del Cañón, I wasn’t sure what to expect. I have spent some time in the States - eight months in Los Angeles many years ago, plus visits to Florida and New York - but the only visions that I have had of the Mid West are from old Westerns. My father relished those films, usually featuring burning hot deserts, barren mountains and dusty old settlements. Unless one visits places first-hand, one tends to be stuck with the s



