7 Things to Keep in Mind About Writing
A simple search on Google will give you a glimpse of the many thousands of books and blog posts that there are on writing. And on this blog, in earlier posts, we have dismantled some writing advice and seen what works and what doesn’t. Here are some tips based on what is given in detail in the e-course How to Write Stories That Work - and Get Them Published! and from experience.
1. Write the first draft of your story in as short a time as possible and without stopping during any single writing session. This is obviously easier with a short story, or a screenplay - with a longer work, condensing time may be difficult. How long does it realistically take? Stephen King’s advice for novel writers is to write the first draft in a single season, or three months. A 100,000 word novel makes that just over 1,100 words a day, every day. The average short story is 4,000 words, or about four hours. Screenplays can be written in three days at 30 pages a day. The first draft is buying the groceries; editing and re-writing is the cooking of the meal.
2. Concentrate on the protagonist. Victor Frankl said, ‘A human being is a deciding being’ and it’s been said that a protagonist must ‘make a decision to get into whatever situation the story is about’ - but it’s actually even simpler than that. The most crucial thing you can do in working on a protagonist is to realise that you are building a construct, not a person. More on that in How Stories Really Work and in the course How to Write Stories That Work - and Get Them Published! The same applies with other characters like the wise old man, the warrior, the comic companion, the female companion and so on.
3. Suspense is all about the question ‘What happens next?’ It’s not just about setting up cliff-hangers though - the reader won’t care unless you’ve already done your character work above. And how do you increase suspense or tension? Add things in which block the way or delay the resolution of something. Your protagonist has to defuse a bomb? Have the bomb halfway up a crumbling wall. Your protagonist is missing his sweetheart? Have him lose all means of contact with her.
4. Common writing advice tell us that, when something interesting happens in your story that changes things, don’t just tell us about it, show it happening. That’s true, but it doesn’t always apply. Think of Gandalf’s battle with the Balrog in The Lord of the Rings; think of Darcy and Elizabeth finally talking of love in Pride and Prejudice. In both cases, these master authors tell us about it rather than showing us. The question to ask is ‘What increases the drama of your story as a whole?’ In the case of The Lord of the Rings, had we been shown the mythic battle directly, our perceptions of the whole world of Middle-earth would have been affected in serious ways; in the case of Austen’s novel, refusing to allow us direct access to the most intimate moments between her key characters enhances them as characters. Telling rather than showing has its place, in other words.